this is like smbz
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Sonic and Shadow recieve a distress message from Mario in the Mushroom Kingdom.
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good but you forget to make the characters nature right shadow will never request any one to join them he is a lone wolf more also he will not help anyone until something serious has happened something
Wait, wouldn't Blaze realize that Silver isn't there and go look for him? Blaze is not stupid, if the world needed saving she'd let Silver go, but now, i am guessing she is looking for him and some way will find him. Can you add more funny dialogue pls? The Action scene was awesome! :).
Some really Funny Story
Anthony:Wait I just came Back From the dead and your not even surprised.
Ian:That Happens Everytime!
Anthony:Oh Yeah! Well Me and My New Favorite Food THE CHILI PEPPER WERE GONNA SMASH YOU
DOWN!!
Ian:IF YOU THINK YOUR STUPID PEPPER CAN TAKE ON MY PINK FROSTED DONUT!!! THEN YOUR GOWING DOWN DICKBISQUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luigi's so funny in it, and Blaze wanting to spend more time with silver-HAHAHAHAHAHHA
but what i didnt like is you need to make the fighting scences faster
~Jujojo