Really good job.
I really cant understand all the math in flash making though.
Author Comments
Yes, my first submission to NG. this is a series about how to make flash games: this particular one is how to move sprites. please use constructive criticism . and just so you know i got a cold halfway through making this and that's why my voice is a little deeper towards the end(congestion).
and if you don't understand the last part about putting the code into the sprite blah blah then pm me and tell me exactly what you don't get (don't say all of it) actually think as to what you don't get and ask me bout it. ill probably help you! :P. thanks!
Great!
Great tutorial , you explain things very well and I understood, keep it up.
Darknes2 responds:
thank you very much, and i will! :)
Am I a retard
or are your explanations pretty bad? There's a lot of good things mentioned in the tutorial, but your explanation of how they work is really lacking. I understood the tutorial mostly because I already know what you said, but assuming I hadn't known it I definitely wouldn't have been much wiser.
You should definitely not try to improvise, at all. Be sure exactly what to say and how to say it, and skip the "wherever, whatever" and preferably all the "yeah"s too.
Actually explain things, take it from the very beginning and go through it. Your explanation of functions was... well, it wasn't even an explanation it was just "here's a function" basically. Not to mention how much I love that I when watching a tutorial for flash is told to buy a book... Also give better examples really, the tutorial example doesn't really help at all for understanding it.
It got potential to be good, but you must think that you're making movies for complete retards with no previous knowledge. Either that or you tell them to have a basic knowledge of Actionscript. As it's now though it feels like you tell them some basics and then sometime seem to assume they know other basic things. Choose either side, not the middle. You could also consider talking slower, it can pretty much never get too slow really.
Darknes2 responds:
thank you i apreciate your review, this is my first tutorial so i didn't expect it too be all too good. but i think ill get the hang of it in the next one (i might just remake this one to be more explanitory )and ill be shure to take more time on it and go into more detail! but basicly in this tutorial i assumed the people had some common sense and could look at some of the things and figure it out but i guess now that i think about it that's not a very good way to do things :P
very good
very good, i dont even use flash and i understood:)
Darknes2 responds:
thank you :)
Yeah
Good tutorial dude!
Darknes2 responds:
thanks :)
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