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Sonic Battle!!!

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Ok, well honestly i wasnt leanin as much on a storyline as much as i was feeling a little hardcore after playin god of war for about 3 hours. I like what most of u said about the sound, i agree with all of u(lol dbz on crack) and i especially enjoyed the ideas of a replay button(cuz i can try that)and the preloader. but i REALLY dont know how to make a preloader im new 2 flash. so if any1 wants to fill me in...plz im here. also to TechLeSSWaYz, ur comment is the most useful to me so id like to know how to do exactly wat u asked me to. plz and thank u all for noticing and speaking ur minds i enjoy it all!

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not bad for a start

seems you have 2 MAIN problems. . .
1st is that you lack in lining the sprites up. (dont worry im not trying to be mean)
you can try what i do sometimes. Make a new layer called Guide and not only do you make a bright, thin outline around your work space(the hole square) also make a line for where everyone stands.

2nd your fps. Im not sure if your doing to much than what you have to, or you have the fps to low. Mine is 15 fps lol i like it that way. looks like your using 12.
try setting it higher OR just stretch the movements out on each keyframes.

but it was good enough to watch ya no? so im giving you 10

narutosMASTA responds:

The most usefull one by far. thanx a bunch.

pretty good start!

this is actually well done good animating and good use of sound :)
add in a pre-loader and maybe add in a replay button at the end of the movie and this could turn out to be a classic.

look forward to seeing the completed version.

Good for a start.

It's pretty good for a start, the animation is fluid as far as I can tell, and the sound actually works.

I only gave you a 6 because the flash isn't finished, so this should actually be in the alphas section (it's an easy mistake to make >.<) and 2. it doesn't have a pre-loader. So, just finish the movie and add a pre-loader and all should be well ^.^

narutosMASTA responds:

thanx!

Adequate

First thing you should prioritize is a preloader for the video.

Lags may be noticed on slower connections, just saying..
Improving audio quality is also a good start.

Good luck.

narutosMASTA responds:

id like to kno how to do a preloader plz.

Meh, decent

It was good. Not the greatest but atleast the animation was pretty good, the sound needs some work.

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