It was alright

Well this was an ok flash and flash idea, but the file seemed abit large try and reduce the file somewhat

Compress the file to start off

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Ouch!

The music hurted my ears. It was a good idea, but it was not very interesting.

good

The drawings were cool, they looked hand-drawn is that the case? Animation was very simple but it was used enough to move the plot along. I didn't like the music. I don't know if you were going for some kind of noise mix that was supposed to sound all dramatic (that's what I got) but the first bit with that screechy sound hurt my ears. Also the ending was a little anti-climatic, you built up the drama and then the problem is fixed in an unlikely way (unless I missed some small detail) Anyways, overall I liked this because of the graphics and the way you built up the drama.