The movement isn't smooth at all. When a guy gets shot, a giant red blob just doesn't appear and float there. Actually animate a blood splat. same thing with the crouching, a person doesn't just shrink when they crouch.
Wat was the plot? All I see is *boom* *boom* and some lame joke that no one can understand. Practice a bit more plz.
This was crappy.
It was pretty bad, it was choppy, it was short, and the joke at the end is really, really, really, lame.
It was pretty good
The only flaws I saw were it didn't run REALLY smooth and it was short. As I said, it was pretty good and I hope you make it longer. It seems like a good concept.