Still followed story lines without audio

There are a couple things I really liked. I thought you did a great job with the animation. The character was portrayed well and even without sound I still got the basis of the story line. The other thing I liked was how you introduced the flash. I thought it was a plate at first and then when he cut it, I realized it was a piece of cake. It was a very creative way to begin. I do agree that audio would definitely help and I also think that the buttons would help as well. That being said, nice job!

Well congrats on your first flash...

...may you prosper on Newgrounds!

Here's how I see the flash:
-You need a load-and-play menu, along with a replay button. This is the sign of a very amature animator.
-Needs audio. Badly. Especially in the scene where the main character goes to get the phone. An annoying buzz on the other end of the phone would really up the scene.
-The drawing was not bad, but not good either, like the little girl's face.

Overall, a not-bad first flash. Just keep practicing and we can expect great things from you!

Audio

I'm guessing since you were just starting out,
You didn't apply it.

Ah well.
Animation was great for your first time.

Atta kid.

ummm

Yeh, needs sound, and the walking needs to be smoother, like maybe 10 frames, not 3? and i really had no idea what was going on.....

it was...

this might b good but i wont kno CASE THERE IS NO SOUND!!!!!!