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this movie is about robot

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vote fairly please!

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You need to get a better quality sound recording for this, as it's quite loud and there seems to be quite a bit of static coming from the speakers when this goes on.

As for the animation, you're just moving still pictures and it looks like you're making no effort to make them seem animate - the robot slides along the floor, with the same pose and doesn't have anything else to make it look like a legitimate animation. The backgrounds are pointless scrawls of colour and you really have made no effort at all.

If you wanted to make an effort, get the plot going, which I would assume is about the robot learning human emotions? From there, develop a story and get it all worked out, before making a decent attempt at a flash.

[Review Request Club]

Robot?

-It really seems to me that you like the ambient background noise since it is used in several of your works as something to fill up space and keep us entertained. This is better than the last one but not by much since there still isn't that much as far as animating involved.

-Cropping is one of the things that I think you could of put a little more time into to improve how some of the things looked. It just makes the work seem shoddy when you don't take the time to do something simple like that. Just take more time when making something.

-Review Request Club

It's animated, all right.

I guess you really like this song. It's pretty neat.

After the last thing I reviewed by you, I'm glad to see you actually put some animation into this one. Even though you kept it to a minimum.

The backgrounds are poorly made. Seems like you put the brush size at max and just used different colours, while drawing long lines up and down. Then there's the robot, which is just a drawing of a robot that you tweaked over the screen. The picture of the cat isn't even cropped.

Again, you should put more effort into the flash. Make the robot animated, not just tweak a picture over the screen. Do some proper cropping if you're using real pictures. Music is fun, but there's no need to put a four-minute song into a 20-second movie.

Review Request Club

quite a nice movie.

i liked it.

pretty fun, pretty beatifull shown....

(ofcourse 2 trippy, but okk)

execute ''vote five'' .rar

DONE.

IndustrialIndustries responds:

hahaha thanks

epic masterpiece

I LOVED IT
EVERYTHING ABOUT IT
ESPECIALLY THE KITTEN

IndustrialIndustries responds:

I KNEW YOU'D LOVE THE KITTEN. THATS ONE OF THE REASONS I PUT IT IN THERE

Credits & Info

Views
4,502
Votes
10
Score
2.15 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 4, 2009
4:11 PM EDT