nice video
but the ending was bad as fuck
Author Comments
This is the first complete flash Ive ever made. It has no audio. It has text instead. I have learned my lesson, and I will not do the text in place of audio again. The video is about my main character "Red" and his anger issues. He gets very upset whenever anyone calls him a pussy. There is an obvious progression of skills throughout the flash. I started this video not knowing anything and was just getting the hang of it at the end. I may recreate it with actual audio, but tell me what you think even how it is right now.
Sound and Object Details
Hey.
Reviewing video, per request. Thanks for replying. (-:
Nice video.
Just needs sounds added for all that is going on.
Try not to leave solid colored backgrounds, for example, the first white background. In the first scene, when the character starts wlaking, it doesn't give an impression that is actually advancing anywhere; it looks like the weapon is moving towards him. :-P
Regarding the artwork: Needs more detail. Since you do vector art, maybe try to add some shading to give depth to objects and characters. It doesn't need to be anything fancy.
One more thing: In the scene when the character gets "teleported", the part of the "energy field" is there, as it should. I noticed that removal of most of the energy field looked like it took part of the table with it. Also when the screen zooms in then back, the final piece is suddenly gone.
Not too shabby video, soldier.
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- Ziro out.
hanman917 responds:
This video was fun to make, but I was glad when it was finished. I basically learned as I went with this one. I am still learning more every day, i just figured id upload this one to show what my starting point was so people can see my progression. I may go back and edit this one sometime, but ill probably just leave it as is, and ill keep making better ones. Thanks for the critique. I actually look forward to reading the review when i see you wrote it.. You give a thorough analysis and good criticism, without making it painful. :) Thanks for checking out my other videos, and as i said in my other response, keep an eye out for more videos to come.
Hrm.
You know, I really wasn't expecting this to be good AT ALL, but that actually turned out alright. Sound is obviously something you need to work on, and your animating definitely needs some work, but I think that if you keep at it, you could end up doing pretty decent stuff. Best of luck.
hanman917 responds:
Thanks. i might go back and take out the text and add sound. Im not sure yet. Thanks for checking it out though and giving some advice.
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