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Apr 3, 2009 | 8:07 AM EDT

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well firstly it was a school project secondly sorry for no preloader bloody flash was messing up and theres no voice acting because there isnt but yer credits to The832 who did all drawing a joint effort though i can't add him to credits ill figure it out eventually man this is annoying arrg sorry man



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

What the....?

Only kidding. I see potential in this piece. Definitely rough around all of the edges. I give it a 5 for effort. You know what would have been funny, if the door opens and either the Detective, who is metal...that makes him a Metal when he comes in the door and says :now, where is that villain?" he slips on "the fish" in the dark. or actually opens the door into the Fish, squishing him a bit behind the door. Comedy's riddled with comedy. Keep working on it.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

good Try

A good try,i cant do much better myself XD but do more practise and you could be a great for a good try


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Keep practising

3 for effort. Try to familarize yourself with the program more. Example, It would have looked much better to use a guide layer for when the villian went was thrown through the window. There are plenty of videos out there showing you how it works.
While your still new, it's a good idea not to rush any work you do while you are still improving your technique, imho. I'm halfway through my first flash I'm submitting myself, and am currently on day 3.

mcjammer666 responds:

this was done in class cant remeber how long it took


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Surprisingly not bad.

Every aspect of this animation needs to be polished, but it actually isn't terrible.