this clip is ok but you should still watch it

I couldent hear it that good and i had my volume all the way up it was also herky jerky and i didnt even get what it was about. wonder what grade hes going to get on his book report. you could raw the lines better and i didny even get what the dead guy was there for and it was a very short summary of the book and what the heck is ubic. this clip was for schol and i think he should of made a website or some thing else just not this. for my school project i did a website called conorforsythe.webs.com and i pretty sure i am going to get an A. I can tell it was his first flash clip and it turned out ok
- conor (from school)
- conor from school

Oh dear.

This is the reason people should get used to using flash before they try to make a submission. The best thing that can come of this is that in a year or so you will look back and think "How the hell did I make something that bad?".

Seriously, my eyes bled.

Might wanna increase the volume

It's way too low, comrade.