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Needs improving and more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well this was entertaining ill give you that, guess this was for china day and such, your animation is quick and short and seems to {LOOP} so you may want to add some stop action code so it doesnt loop, not just that but you may want to, think more of a story for it yours seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, and seems to have nothing to do with china day but hey there has been alot worse that has come thru the portal, now all the {FACES} are cute, but you just need much more content and think of a story maybe they could have some sorta battle? or something along them lines, but something but i did have abit of a chuckle watching this so it was ok lol, anyways better luck next time. try and improve with those tips i suggested and ill post a few more down below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all add more to the story, give it more meaning, it was too short too random, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash

~~OVERALL~~
some smiley icons battling it seems, needs more thought and effort.

~X~


Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you


Good stuff.

Your animations are good. I am not too sure what exactly they have to do with "China Day". But if you wanted to make it seem more of a Chinese welcome without changing your animation I'd add some oriental music int the background.

FunFact: "China Day" is the same day as April Fool's Day. :P


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Apr 1, 2009
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