Try again!

I think that you should try once more. Of course I can see that's you first animation ever, but, to be honest, you need to improve your skills more and more. Try studying a little bit more and asking people around friend. I don't want to be a bad guy here, but you really need to improve your skills, with all due respect, my friends. Sorry for any english mistakes here because I live at South America.

I don't like it

I honestly don't know where to start. It seems like most of the other people have said everything that i would have. The audio is just really painful to listen to. It makes me feel like it's some kind of alien language with all the cracks and breaks in the clip, and i have no idea what is being said there. Even the stop-and-go animation isn't nearly as fluid as it could be. It doesnt take that much skill to move a clay figure less and use additional frames. Please keep trying.

ugh, how should I put this......

It's terrible.
I only gave you a one cause some stuffed animal ate somebody. Which was somewhat funny.

Unoriginal and unfunny

Where to start... First of all, the one thing that bugged me the most about this flash was the fact you used Knox's klaymen. That's where I get the "unoriginal" from. Claymations are neat and fun to do, but they won't be appreciated if you copy someone else's character design.

Second, from what I can hear of the audio, it's scratched up and hard to understand. Plus you're speaking way too fast and I can't follow what's going on. I'm not even sure what the jokes were supposed to be because it happened so quickly.

Fix these things, and you might be a decent animator someday.

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Sorry mate, this really wasn't a Flash [Fl] animation and it should be on youtube somewhere. I also didn't understand very much of it...

Next time animate with [Fl]

~XS°~