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This was my first attempt at making a flash comic. I give a ton of credit to you guys out there that make stuff like this on a daily basis. It's hard work, that and I don't know action scripts for my life. XD
(Made this thing in 2 days, It was going to be animated, but I ran out of time)

Anyway, The basic idea of the tournament was that a shadow apparition finds your original character and tells them that they can receive whatever their greatest desire is as long as they follow him to Nevara.

The story intro is here : http://tinyurl.com/2at3lh m

I didn't make it into the OCT the end, but this comic was the most real thing I've ever made to a full out flash.


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wow you go gurl

you've inspired me to do something now cher. And you have great voice acting talent.

very nice

continue it i like it^^

ColonelCheru responds:

awww thank you! XD

I will when I have some more free time.

I love a good story

Especially when it's represented so well. The art is good, and you have quality voice actors, which are both definite pluses. I say do more, but I do agree with fjgamer on one thing: still pictures are just a little uninvolving. Now, if this were a motion comic, where every frame had just a tiny bit of animation, it would feel more like a living, breathing world. I think it would also be a good idea to place the whole thing in a comic-book format, the camera simply panning from pannel to pannel, and prompting the viewer to turn the pages.

I say make more, but at least consider some of the suggestions I've given you, okay?

ColonelCheru responds:

Yeah I can agree to that.

and thank you for the advice. I'll most likely use some of those ideas. XD

not bad

it's preaty great but you could have done more
longer perhaps, and atleast a little of animation

ColonelCheru responds:

Yeah I agree with you on the length.
I had a much longer script, but due to time restraints I could only throw this much together.
Thank you though. :3

Loved it

Great comic, loved the setting and animation. Overall everything was done really well.

ColonelCheru responds:

Thank you very much! :3

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4.33 / 5.00

Mar 28, 2009
12:18 AM EDT