I really did like this at first. I admit that I didn't like how long it was. There should have just been less going on. It's not a complicated story! I still did like the mythos you did put into it. I liked the animation for the most part.
I just like these little guys. They look like versions of Kirby. The music works well too. It could use a tad more color. It's nice how this has a high rating for something with so few views.