ready to rock?
weird, colorfull, but it didn't make sence..
Author Comments
I know this sucks so you don't have to tell me that... It is my first flash and I did this only having flash for like 4 or 5 days and Having no idea what to do... This is what I have so far... I don't think its compleatly done, but it is for now because its all I know how to do right now... so Please tell me what you think, and please don't be to harsh... also please do not blam it... It is my first and I would like to keep it up so I can update it as I get better... also it will be much longer than this, but this is all I have for now... so please rate and comment and give constructive criticism.... Thanks.
Wern't Ready
Why even submit if you've only had flash for a few days?
wait till you can do somthing of quality dont rush into it thats your constructive crtisism and its not too harsh
"I know this sucks"
Yup, but not this hard. First of all I'd like to say: Grow up. Don't get the wrong idea, it's not about the flash but you. Why? AUTHOR COMMENTS:
"I know this sucks" - And you want us to say "don't worry, it's fine"? Cheap method that ain't goin to work.
"It's my first flash" - Personally, I don't give a damn if it's 1st or 100th. We review your submission, not your artistic profile.
"Please tell me what you think, and please don't be to harsh... also please do not blam it..." - So you don't want me to tell you what I really think : / You can update it anytime, it's not like it will vanish from your cpu.
"I did this only having flash for like 4 or 5 days and Having no idea what to do..." - Yup, so what did you expect? Maybe 1st do something that you will be proud of and then post it? Yea, that's the way it should be.
Ok, about the flash now - it wasn't that bad, but of course it still requires a hell lot of work on it. I don't think it should be longer, cause the idea is perfect for a short clip. I didn't really like the story (it's my personal opinion, others may like it) but it was a bit unexpected so 1 point for creativity. Not much to say about graphics - since you used your own drawings it heavily depends on how good you can draw. Again it wasn't totally bad, I can see you did put some effort here. My rating is 1/5 1/10. Can't rate it higher. The real score on review would be 3, but I guess you need to learn how to take the criticism, since you tried to use some cheap tricks in your comments. (BTW it won't work, trust me, just face the ratings like a man). Work hard after you find an idea that you will find amusing to animate.
Defiance09 responds:
First of all I wasn't trying to use tricks to get people to vote high, I was just trying to say that I know I'm not good but I don't care because I had fun with it. Second This whole thing was just a way for me to learn how to use flash... The only reason I want to keep it up is to show a few of my friends... after that I don't care what happens to it. Third, I was saying its my first flash because almost everyone says that when they post their first one. Fourth There is a difference between telling someone what you thing and being a dick about it... A big difference.
Oh and actualy... Thank you, and I am not joking... I honestly thank you, You gave an honest review and you backed up why... It was stuff that I already knew, but nonetheless... Anyways, Thanks, and I hope you review all of my submissions, because at least I know you can give honest reviews.
idea is well, but poor presentation
i did like the idea of lucky blowing the heads off of those pesky kids, but, the flash was a litle bit too much like MS paint, try using shapes effectively in order to help with that
meh
I gave it a 2 out of five because it was bad, but a first submission
Credits & Info
- Views
- 4,496
- Faves:
- 1
- Votes
- 17
- Score
-
1.32 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 24, 2009
- 8:32 PM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody