Well I will say that this is entertaining, the images and sound together make for something funny so great film here with some good entertainment value here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure where to improve on this as this seemed more random, maybe adding some animation in there of some sorts.
the childlike mormonism overtones in the movies and books are hilariously played up and made even more obvious in this. Good job.
Lol! Love Bella and Edward's voices, Bella sounds so annoying, and Edward is v. condescending. Funny as!
JUST LISTEN TO THEIR VOICES HE IS EVIIILLLL