Good stuff
Ok so here I would like to give you some cheers on a job well-done you deserve it and more, so as with this entry you have done very well, there could be some small changes but overall its pretty decent. I really like the characters and use of color here, and the "VOICES" really bring this alove, so props to you on a nice piece of work here Anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash submission, There could be some small changes but overall this is a decent entry you have here.
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So I hope I can help out abit here, But the onlything I can see you changing up would be to ad some subtitles.
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