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Well, it looked good. Just the idea was sort of... silly. You could make a really great flash good idea. Also, the surprise ending shocked me.
Author Comments
Title says it all, obvious ending.
Correction of the version that went wrong the first time, I don't know how to remove it... :D
Comments/Feedback is always good to read.. :D
Yeah
feedback
you said you wanted some feedback so i only have a few minor things
1)the head goes thru the tree the head should be in front of the tree
2) more color in background
3) i didn't like the song lol
so really its a good game i had to find a few things that could make it better lol
gj and al
monkeybars responds:
I can get rid of the song, I think it was just in my head today...
I'll add colour to the next short.
I didn't notice the head problem, haha. I'll keep it in mind leateviathan. < No idea what that means. .. . . . .
Well you wanted a review...
...and here it is!
-You got the load and play menu, which is nice.
-Stick people are nice, but you'd want to move on to "real" drawing if you want to flourish on Newgrounds!
-You should've painted the trees white so they block the Point-Of-View of the car when it was flying past them. When the car flew past the tree (in front of behind?) the tree displayed the qualities of a see-through.
-The animation was smooth enough, but the movements of the stickman seemed unnatural.
-Add a replay button, even if the flash is short. Shows how professional you can get!
Overall, a nice little flash, but needs much improvement. Keep up the good work bro!
monkeybars responds:
Best response. Even though you only gave me a three, It gives me an idea of what I need to work up to. Thanks again.
Really pictures are sometime to hard to animate, they end up out of shape and size.
Either way.
Thanks.
2nd time's a charm!
I was hoping that this 2nd submission was gonna be a fix from the first, since the first was a jacked up version of this. Not bad though. Your stick figure animation is pretty smooth, and a good choice of music. Try to make another stick flash that's a little longer. Good luck to you in the future man.
monkeybars responds:
Haha, yeah I coudn't figure out how to delete the last one, whoops...
Oh well, I fixed it up, haha, something went wrong with the layers, Thanks for the review.
I once went on holiday to Cyprus, I was scared because the roads were narrow on the side of a cliff...
A little short
This was the whole movie?
Well, still. It's good. For the actual animation, it's good.
monkeybars responds:
The actual animation is what I was concentrating on! :D
Thanks for the feedback LepyThedinosuar?