Lack of Quality & Boring
Your artwork is sloppy and it matches the animation, not a good thing... plus you did use clipart here and there which shows laziness. The voice acting is just you tinkering around with your own voice which came out well, you're a decent voice actor. The sound did tend to get annoying and it at times was off topic. The one thing that wanted me to close this flash before even watching it was your intro... it was just a mess and not pleasing to the eye or to the ear. As for making an educational flash, it's not a bad concept and I've seen people succeed in the past, but you however did not. Sure the education is there, but the fun factor isn't. It is unappealing and certainly not funny, not even stupid funny. I suggest you find watch a few flash tutorials here on Newgrounds.
|| Good Points ||
*Great Voice
|| Bad Points ||
*Bad Artwork
*Bad Animation
*Terrible Sound
*Terrible Story
*Boring