Roger Van Der Weide Vs Goanimate
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WARNING: CONTAINS STICKS! (DON'T HATE THEM!)
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Heya, NGers!
This is probably my first big and serious flash project. I'm n00b. But I worked very hard on this one. I began doing this as a test but I decided to add a storyline and music. So this is the result. :D
Visit:
www.Flash-Deck.com
www.Sticktacular.com
GREAT MEMBERS! :3
- Jarty.
EDIT: Wow! Thanks for awesome score and great reviews! You, guys, rock! <3
Nice one
Well i thought in the beginning is boring but when i watched the rest i liked it 9 stars because of the beginning
Jartemius responds:
Hi. Thanks for comment. Good luck!
Good job, Jarty
For your first seriously made flash, i applaud you.
Although i found it a bit too slow paced at times, i liked the smooth animation and interaction between characters.
Overall, nice one. I hope to see more from ye. >: D
Jartemius responds:
Hi, Hacky!
I didn't know that you have a NG account... Anyway, thanks for coment. And about ''more'' - don't worry. ;)
Very Well Made.
Even though I wasn't too fussed about the audio choice - it was alright, I guess - I thought this animation was pretty good. You have great potential to - not just make better stick figure animations - but maybe start using proper figures in animation. Nice start, anyways; you obviously know how to animate.
I also liked the little effects you had thrown in such as the whole slow-mo concept. Very well done. The filter effects you used were also effective. The thing I guess I wasn't too sure on was the whole text dialogue idea as it's usually used but not too well... but I guess you managed to make it look rather clean, so I'll make an exception. Maybe for later flash projects you could add voice acting.
Anyways, overall: I enjoyed watching this and thought you did a damn good job for your first submission here on Newgrounds. I wish you luck on your future projects, and if you stick around on this site longer, I'll keep my eyes out for you. 7/10.
Jartemius responds:
Thank you for the amazing reviw. You made me happy. :D
You called?
I'm giving it a ten, simply for the name :3
Animation: 7/10
For a stickman flash, it wasn't too bad..I liked some of the slow-motion effects, and the movement was fluid..However, the people had very short arms..
Concept/Storyline: 6/10
Well, it's a stickfigure fighting movie, I can't give you any originality points for it, but I liked the inclusion of humour too, and the faces were nice..
Audio: 8/10
I like the music, generally..It fitted well, and was good music anyway. I also liked how you brought in the music. Usually, I wouldn't say this, but this time, voice acting would have ruined it.
Overall: 10/10
Not a bad movie, but AWESOME NAME!!!
I would have given it a 7, but the name!! :3
Jartemius responds:
OMG! LOL. THANKS A LOT FOR REVIEW!!!