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Submitted for the Bi-Weekly contest.

Starring:

-ExplosiveLock
-WineLock

This is NOT spam, this is a real animation. Locks aren't evil people.

You may want to turn up the volume a bit.

Enjoy!

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God damn it sunshine...

What the hell is Brucellosis!?


uglyslug responds:

oh you'll find out


You commented on someone alse not mine

Well, well, look who it is...

~Plot~
Unstable. No humor, simple, not the most interesting story in world. At least in was slightly easy to follow.

~Animation~
Was the frame rate at 12? Please adapt to ~18-30, for smoothness. I personal use 24fps. Mostly, the animation was terrible. Background was boring and unfitting. You need a load more practice with Flash before you submit anything else. Very shotty.

~Sound~
Many new animators don't realizes how important using sound is. It really adds feeling and mood to a Flash. Instead of using cheap text bubbles, use voices. It keeps the viewer focused.


uglyslug responds:

That's incredibly immature.


Brucella Melitensis?

That was fucking great! Comedy gold, make more of these shorts, good stuff.


uglyslug responds:

Haha,

Brucella melitensis is one of the species of bacteria that cause brucellosis.

Are you a doctor, lazyDoctor?


lol good job.

Hilarious. And good choice of disease as well. :D


uglyslug responds:

I'm an expert in dying.


You'll find out...

lol, GREAT first flash sunshine. can't wait to see more.


uglyslug responds:

Aww, you cared so much you even review with your original account.

<3

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Score
3.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 15, 2009
1:04 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Parody
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