I Have read the story, And I'm impressed that you could meld Mario's light-hearted tones with Dante's Classic tales of Damnation. I'm SLIGHTLY dissapointed that I didn't see the Malebolge and It's inhabitants, the Malebranche (Who I guessed would be covered by the koopa kids), but I guess you had a good enough reason to skip that section. And it's good to see original illustrations rather opposed to typical sprite animation. They're more original in my opinion. Nevertheless, I take this tale as a sort of "Inferno for beginners". Nice job.