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Doodle.

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I'd like to say i worked very hard on this. Seeing as i was graded on it. I didnt have much time to put sound effects n it like i wanted so i had to throw some music from NG on here.


EDIT: For any of you who saw this without preloader sorry. for you who have. good for you.


Plz rate and enjoy

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okay....

this gets Eight

shizuka6288 responds:

Yet i got ten...meh i wont complain =P

aight

its good but it reminds me of pencilmation

shizuka6288 responds:

Lol i noticed that yesterday working on Doodle 2...damnit

Nice

I think you can improve you're movie by making the pencil rotate when its drawing something. Also, the replay button doesn't work that well...

shizuka6288 responds:

Yeah the replay button doesnt work for different scenes. So i am sorry on the mix up.

Here's the thing.

You've got some good ideas... and I like how it was confined to the piece of paper...

...but there are a LOT of "stick combat" cartoons on here, so if you do one, take the time to make the movement really good and really fluid.

shizuka6288 responds:

Good point but it was made in the sense of humor. also i was working on a deadline and couldnt do it to wekll as i wouldve liked

Unoriginal Idea

An unoriginal idea, but well executed, it's good. Just try to be more imaginative.

Credits & Info

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Votes
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Score
4.32 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 8, 2009
9:25 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental