Not too bad.
Under normal circumstances I don't really like uncolored, anime style animations...but yours is above average at least in that.
Consider coloring it, and making the text scenes longer. I couldn't read the first speech bubble at all, it was so tiny, neither of them had nearly enough time to read them all the way through.
Oh, and in the word you were looking for is "altar" not "alter".
aye yai ^^ i am working on it all the way, i just wanted to finish this up for a quick joke for our beauty and teh beast thing we're doing in the high school, i'm the girl who gets married to the short guy "le fou" XD ^^ we added a scene to make it funny so yeah^^ i get to flirt with le fou XD
i cant hug a short person.
1. im to tall, id have to get on my knees
2. all the short people i know, are eithor hairy hobbit type men, or big around girls.
3. all my pants have holes in them, so im not getting on my knees, ever.
thank you...uhh..you could hug me XD ^^ i'm thin and short and a girl lol
and i'm going to finish this up soon^^