Stupid fast moving text! lol
Okay, so i've noticed you've already been given plenty of crap for this one, so i'll try the best i can to give you some good tips.
First of all, SLOW DOWN SOME OF THE PARTS A LITTLE! lol Yes I realize you meant for it, but it's a little distracting to have random words pop up that you have to watch his like thirty times before you can even catch one of the words. This is mostly for near the end.
Also, the replay button at the end is a little touchy, you should probably make it easier to actually click on. I do like the look of the button when it's hovered over though.
In the beginning the gun doesn't seem to even be attached to the person lol
Anyways, not awefully terrible for a first submission, just keep working on it. =3
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