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OK, u got potential

Its amazing. And it was hard to tell it was looping. But listen:

U dont wanna be making a submission a day. you wanna do it well. If u want to improve this video itself, go to www.flashkit.com and get some sounds to use. And, also, ur animation flow (how fluently ur character moves) was good. SO good that I couldnt tell it was looping until the 3rd time thru. In a way, thats a downside because that wastes a viewers time. He DOES need to get other reviews done. If u want sum more advice just PM me

TAke ur time. I noticed wen I was doing flash, I was sending them out 1 a day. Now, they were decent length and had some good stuff. It did have actual talking and stuff. But this kinda thing really shouldnt be submitted to newgrounds. This was just a test run that u did to try out flash. Thats fine, but dont go submitting it. People on Newgrounds dont like that. The character needs to do something more than smile, and if its gonna be really short, its gotta be really fun or really random. That way they laff hard enuff to give it a good score.

FINALLY: Your video loops. U dont want this. In fact, u shood have a "retry button" so they can view it again instead of it just looping. People dont like loops

Substance!

Don't be discouaged by the low score...as a piece of digital art, it's a great first effort, and I'd love to see where you go from here. As a Newgrounds submission, however, it just doesn't have enough to it...it's a test loop, simply put. Once you work more with Flash and produce full projects...even half-minutes ones...you'll see a much stronger positive response.

Though I gave you a four as a Newgrounds submission, for what it is, I'd give it an 8. I think you did well. Keep it up!

What is this?

There was absolutely no point in you uploading this here
You got something decent going
and you decided to stop there and submit what you had?
Newgrounds isn't some place to dumb your anime loops
God forbid every other flash was like your's
then who would want to come here?
I seriously don't even understand how this wasn't blammed.

good start!

I liked the drawing, and how you animated the emotions. Keep this up, and you'll dominate the portal in no time!

a few quick tips on making flash better, in case you're really ambitious

put sound in your flash (this might sound really stupid, but a good song, or at the very least dialogue makes a flash SOOOO much better)

You did great on your drawing, so no lecture there, but i will say if you're REALLY committed to making flash, you should add a smidge more time into it.

Or, if you're like me and have neither the time nor the attention span to pay attention to this crap, then go airhead for now and bask in the bliss!