Weekly nro 1
Nice work. Usually flashes here on newgrounds are based on 1 joke or just randomness, but your movie mostly resembled a real tv-episode from Steinfeld, Frazier etc. The story was fully build with beginning and ending, dialogue well written and characters had some sort of character.
Without looking you credentials I can tell you have the right mindset for serious work in this kind of buseness. I'm a 6th year student at literary study and have seen hundreds of such short movies. In my opinion: Weekly best, definately.
You could propably loose some of the crazyness of the character (the psyciatrist mainly) to make it more real and to make a stronger point. Audience here at newgrounds is mainly teenagers seeking for laughs, so its kind of propriate here - but you could aim for more serious (and yet ever more funny) dialogue. Some tragic elements could power up the humor.
Wow man, what a great review. Most of us are in the industry one way or another so its nice to know that a certain amount of professionalism shows. Our goal is, one way or another, television. Whether it be with this series or any of our other endeavors, so I'm really happy to hear such a positive review in that aspect.
Your suggestions are well noted. We could probably have toned it down a little for this short, but we decided to go all out wacky with the character, just for fun. I'll certainly take your suggestions into account for future cartoons.