LOLz a million
I gotta say, the first time I saw this, I didn't like it... but this being my second time watching, definitely changed something in me. Very funny, and your cleanest work yet. Everything is really smoothe, and once again you put out characters that are original with new and different ideas than the last episode. In short, NICE WORK, buddy!
This is the first video I've seen by you, but I like the style of your artwork. The animation is good and smooth, and I like how it was different for the dream sequence. Like many others have said, and I agree, the voice acting was great. The material itself was funny and with a good delivery. I kind of hope I can feel more engaged with the characters in your future videos, instead of waiting for the next joke to befall Jason. Still, well done. You've proved yourself to be a quality flash artist in my eyes.
I can see how much hard work was put in to this, good job!
Thanks. A LOT of hard work WAS put into this. Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I've been writing too many glowing reviews lately.
... but this animation has the best voice acting and dialogue I've heard on Newgrounds. The animation is also decent (although the jump to sketchy quality for the dream sequence seemed a little out of place) and I'm a big fan of the pause button in the upper right hand corner. Everyone movie should have a pause button.
Thanks! If there's one thing I pride our shorts on, its the voice acting. My animating skills do improve with every short we do, so I'm glad people are starting to like it better, and the pause button... well I've come to realize that there is just so much you can miss in our shorts so it really became necessary. Thanks again for the review.
Weekly nro 1
Nice work. Usually flashes here on newgrounds are based on 1 joke or just randomness, but your movie mostly resembled a real tv-episode from Steinfeld, Frazier etc. The story was fully build with beginning and ending, dialogue well written and characters had some sort of character.
Without looking you credentials I can tell you have the right mindset for serious work in this kind of buseness. I'm a 6th year student at literary study and have seen hundreds of such short movies. In my opinion: Weekly best, definately.
You could propably loose some of the crazyness of the character (the psyciatrist mainly) to make it more real and to make a stronger point. Audience here at newgrounds is mainly teenagers seeking for laughs, so its kind of propriate here - but you could aim for more serious (and yet ever more funny) dialogue. Some tragic elements could power up the humor.
Wow man, what a great review. Most of us are in the industry one way or another so its nice to know that a certain amount of professionalism shows. Our goal is, one way or another, television. Whether it be with this series or any of our other endeavors, so I'm really happy to hear such a positive review in that aspect.
Your suggestions are well noted. We could probably have toned it down a little for this short, but we decided to go all out wacky with the character, just for fun. I'll certainly take your suggestions into account for future cartoons.