Excellent job! A few minor things the dialogue is kinda hard to understand sometimes.
bravo excellent job!
dude this video is so freaking funny as hell excellent
Good art and there is a lot in the story. What happened to that dude's heart was freaky (good freaky) but yea like the person below me said subtitles would've helped at certain parts (like when the little demon or whatever was talking). Also I kinda prefer it when the advancement to text is controlled by the reader. Still this looks good. I hope you animate the rest of the series or get the story out there in some form.
It was cool, but I couldn't understand what was being said by the characters.
Excellently made the introduction was very well animated. But proofread your text, the usage is their not there.