That really was funny! "Im going to go discharge feces from my body!"- totally classic.
I liked it.
I think you should have quoted some more scripture in this one, but otherwise good job. Yet another bible story that makes no sense.
this is good
yeah its good..but ist bad at the same time
hahahaha, too good.
altho I assume it may hit a few sore spot with the bible tappers around here.
But, It does cantain much truth, If their willing to accept it or not =P.