needs work
The story is only told in the end and it makes sense
The Animation needs work, the voice overs were nice if this was your time trying.
I gave you a 3 overall if you think about it right away it makes sense
Author Comments
So here's another flash. This was another step up for me, and I think I'm finding my feet stylistically. The bike symbol didn't turn out great, but I learned a fair amount from it. This is just a short animation about annoying people on a forum I frequent.
Pointless and Stupid.
Animation- Total shit, you need more practice.
Story- It doesn't make any sense.
Sound- Alright, but the screaming was a pain in the ass.
Overall- Has a MAJOR amount of improvement until presentable.
Funny Stuff
Some of the transistions seemed a tad too long for me(But I am very imaptient) otherwise was a good flash. Simple and funny.
Also, no one likes forums, I used to frequent them myself, then I got bored of trolling, and now /b/ .