OK that was interesting
~~REVIEW~~
The animation was ok, but the idea was disturbing at times but you did do well on this so nice work
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff like this animation would be cool
~~OVERALL~~
odd but cool
~X~
Author Comments
Every now and then, great achievements in science are made. They help us understand our world. I am helping you to understand that world, as well. Journey with me as I mess around general science. On a serious note, this is an idea I had bobbing in my head, and I wanted to get it down in flash before I lost it. I will be returning to it later to clean it up, but this is the beginning of a series. It is very short, but the redux will be longer. I'm posting this to get some feedback and to see if you lovely people would like to see more videos of science being toyed with. Enjoy. I will respond to any and all comments and invite you to make them.
CyanideBreathmint responds:
Thanks for the review. I only threw this together in about 2 hours in the wee hours while I couldn't sleep. It will get better.
hmmm funny concept
i liked it
hopefully it's alot cleaner next time you should put in a bit more suspense like he's about to sneeze ah ah ah but then he stops and it's like phew and then maybe you should just have his head explode and leave the rest of the body intact
maybe put more detail into the background
the music went with it pretty good
keep on flashin!
CyanideBreathmint responds:
They will have more suspense. And I know it's kind of hard to tell, but he bursts into a piece of popcorn at the end. The remake will have various people popping to get the point across. Thanks for the review
This wasn't phun.
The animation was pretty good but i didn't like the subject of the video. You should've put something more interesting in this video and even make it longer.
CyanideBreathmint responds:
This was made in only about 2 hours. If you have suggestions for things that are more "phun" let me know.
LOL
the credits is even better then the main video
CyanideBreathmint responds:
I pride myself on my credits.
LoL
Pretty funny and I love science ! That I why I would suggest to add some of the actual biology involved to make the flash really informative. How about, before or after the guy dies (lol), explain in the form of an animation, or plain tekst which would be boringer, how a sneeze works and why it is healthy to let it all out.