found it very interesting and you had a great sense of claymation, its not start n stop broken camcorder for a knox knock-off! cos thats good!
keep it up!
but i dunt think ng is the place for claymation. youtube maybe?
youtube can lick my butt.
You need to sort your voice recordings out, there is a lot of background interference and it ruins it egardless of how good the voice acting or the dialogue is.
Some of the movements seem a little rusty too.
Other than that a good submission.