It's a pretty damn good game. The storyline is good, and I like the click-time events. Takes a few tries, but it's good. I really hope you make another one, and if it's already out, just reply saying it's out or something.
Not bad... Not bad at all. The story is well explain but not the environment... But at the same time, it let your imagination do the work. It would be great if was more longer and also a better story because it is kind of straightforward. I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing. I've always been a fan of these types of games, never played one quite like this. The endings of each arc suggest a sequel (but maybe its out and I just haven't found it yet), but each individual story has its own perks. Each one could be it's own story, which is more than what can be said for most games that try to have more than one story line option. One problem, my computer is a bit slow and jerky (i know for a fact it isn't the game or browser, its my monitor) so it was difficult to complete the Human arc. Graphics are definitely an option, but I think they would take away from the story. People would be focused on the drawings and not pay attention when there was a reflex scene, or forget about the actual story. Over all, the story is simply fantastic.
The only story who I couldn´t beat was the humans.
At the door in the cave,it seems I never handle it do press the button in time.
A bug,or am I simply to lame?
(I would wonder,´cause I even made the Dwarfenstory with no problem.)
Shouldn't be a bug hmmm
I will look into it
i liked it a lot
obviously, it would have been better if it was longer, but you stated before thaty it was a test, so i will not hold that against you
i liked how you had the option to back up instead of having to start all over again
you said that you were planning on making a better one, so i have some sugestions for you ^^
-you definetly should add some graphics
-another idea that came to mind, was possibly some more interactive scenes. for example: on the human adventure, when you have to find the key, maybe have a "point and click" adventure scene where you actually have to find the key.
-of course, you would probably want to add more than 3 choices for levels
this reminded me A LOT of those "choose your own adventure" books and i thought that it was a very creative concept, and a lot different from most of the overdone cliched games that most people submit.
i hope to see the sequel soon, as I am anticipating it.
if you want any more ideas, feel free to PM me, as i am very willing to help ^_^
I PMed ya :D
Great review btw