Cons: Using a baboon and a clock in the game would have made for a much more satisfying product.
Overall: Your art and skills are amazing, unquestionable, and unmistakable. I'd say myself that if you used a babboon and a cloxck more often in your animations, you would come up with even more creative, colorful products.
Imagine the audience you would generate, with this animation, if it had a baboon and a clock. The possibilities are endless. You would , at the least get a much higher rating.