I don't really know what to say to you... You've made it hard to review this one...
Let me start off by saying that the graphics weren't as outstanding as I would have liked it, especially when you consider that this is very profound, and usually those are marked with great graphics.
Second, the movements were very stiff and robotic, and not very human-like.
The idea was good, but poorly executed.
More work, maybe?
While WAY better than bedtime...
I thought the animation was VERY robotic and unnatural for such an emotionally free flash. Every scene made me wish the movement was more smooth, but it just kept repeating the same awkward looping a few times too many.
But this deserves at least an 8, good job.
Not gonna lie i figured all the newgrounds stuff was all crap
this was really good.
Artistic and unique.
Artistic movies on NG, while not unheard of, are rather rare. It seems to me that this is a story about love and loss. I cannot think of any other movie on NG that captures this theme in a similar way. Good job.
There were flaws, however. The biggest flaw that I detected was that the motion is jerky and unnatural. It lacked the fluidity of motion in the real world. It seems that the characters are moving in loops, repeating the motion multiple times as well, exacerbating the problem of the unnatural motion. Watch the movie yourself and you will see what I mean. This jerkiness distracted me while I watched this movie, especially during the dance scene and when the man is walking into, through and out of the dark space. maybe the looping, unnatural movement was intentional, but it distracted me and detracted from the experience.
Still, I think that overall this was a good movie. I hope to see more submissions from you soon.
I like your animation style! Nice work on the clothes.