Its hard to get this started off with the right words, so ill just go ahead and say that I have had some fun with this entry, you pushed the efforts, and showed us some interesting things, now ofcourse there were a few issues were things could be better, but overall I thought you did a good job on this one and showed some effort thruout the entry. This was prettygood, the artwork and characters are pretty impressive the animation was notbad, I think the only issue I had was the "VOICES" they are notbad but could be better. So after seeing this a few times I thought it was alright some stuff I was not too fond of but other stuff I really liked what you showed here, and theres even more potential to it aswell.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was certainly A decent film here, I do Recommend Some Tweaking, on the improvment side of things, theres not much to say on the matter since most of it was pretty straight forward but. The voices could be better more actiong on the parts or something to give more improvemenst in that aspect of things.