Personally i loved it but...
i really dont think a lot of people get what you are trying to say here
i think i know
you made sarah and put her in a video game?
anyway
you deserve one of these lol
-Critique-
Originality: 4/5
Well very unoriginal lol 0/5
but I loved how you pulled the idea of a video game and put a person into it 8/5 lol
Graphics/Animation: 3.5/5
The graphics are well...
Better than I could do, but there is a lot of better stuff out there. You could use some work with your other characters make them more appealing to the viewer. I did like your main character though very well drawn i thought. Over all pretty amateur (in a good way). 2.5/5
The animation has plenty of movement and keeps the view into the movie which few people put into their animations. The animation movement itself is pretty good. I simply feel though you need more ambient movement in it (background stuff moves). 4.5/5
Overall though great.
Sound/Voice: 5/5
Amazing sound usage. I, for some reason, fell in love with it as soon as i heard it. I definitely have no 'bones-to-pick' with this.
Plot: 4.5/5
The plot is just as good as a plot should be in a video game. I thought it was pretty funny with all the stuff you put in (guy w/ a bra). I took of a little because I have seen people do this kind of stuff before. You just put it well together.
Overall: 17/20 = 8.5/10
The graphics all in all seem amateur, but the story is very well put together.
{bonus points} +.5
Because I fell in love with your sound.
Final Score:
9/10 (4.5/5)