The Green Monster is Your Mom
Hey there ZeroGravity. Thank you for letting me watch your short flash, I enjoyed it.
Very creative, very original. You were creating something new and original that I haven't seen before, well done. The origins were something from a different planet, for reals. I like your style of art, the simplicity of the animation, etc. very cool. Big ups for creativity.
The soul of your animation was not conveyed so much, however. It wasn't very efficient that the green monster was labelled as 'your mom'. I ultimately recognised that this was an attempt to be funny for funny's sake. But then, I realised that perhaps you see your own mum as a monster, a big green monster that eats you alive. I gave you benefit of doubt for that, points. Overall, not too much soul here.
I was quite entertained, but not rolling on the floor laughing. It was quite a nice short and sweet animation, and made me smile, but no rib-buster. You could have improved it by adding in more jokes, again length was a problem here. But it was funny, by all means, you can take that to the bank.
I thought this was very professional indeed. The drawings were great, sound was perfect. The only drawback was that it didn't have a replay button, so that I had to refresh it in order to have a 2nd look (which I prefer to, since it was so short). A replay button would be much-loved, but the play button was simple and professional, nothing too much was shabby or out of line. Well done.
I give this a low score because I felt it was too short to begin with. I would like to see a longer submission, definitely. In my opinion. Short is sweet, but too short is just not enough. More substance would definitely be much accepted. Thank you for letting me watch your flash, it was great.
- Creativity/Originality 10/10
- Soul 5/10
- Entertainment 7/10
- Professionalism 8/10
- Reviewer's Tilt 2/10
OVERALL SCORE: 6.4/10
ROUNDED SCORE: 6/10
VERDICT: PRETTY GOOD
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