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so, I was in my writing class last semester and my teacher reads us this essay, which as far as I know is real, to boost our confidence in writing. This was originally written by a Jeremy Lavine, then animated by me, and it is word for word what he wrote. here is a link to the site where his paper is posted...
http://www.angelfire.com/
theforce/blix797/Essay/es say2.html
the animation isnt great, I know that, but I think its pretty funny. well enjoy
All i got from that was that lightning knocks down trees.
Very random and follows off track of being educate
But it was fun all the same.
Though I strongly feel your narration could use improvement.
Don't forget to emphasize your voice when times become excitable or violent.
Your voices is rather monotone. That's the only real down side.
never know...
because they were killed by lightning
then their tree fell down
on the research.
Ps. i lol'd.
This was amazing.
Not the greatest animation in the world, but it's always fun to make fun of failure. Good work.