Original please....
Please.... this is brand new idea... come on....
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It's been a year or more since I did flash so I had to relearn it
the next one will be much beater.
Feel free to give tips for making flash sprite movies because of how long it been
I did one.
the only reson why my name appers alot in credits is becasue I didn't have any help with
making this film.
Blammed
This had no effort put into it, but i was going to give it a chance, then I saw the grammatical errors, and I lost all hope and closed my screen.
I really couldn't get into this....
The "story" seemed to move so slowly, not to mention all the spelling errors in the text box. The spellings a small gripe compared to everything else, sure. Bute sumtymes it cn git frustetng to shif tru sayd text (it wasn't nearly THIS bad, but in reading that, you get the general idea.). Along with the texts' spelling is the text box ITSELF. the text box in "sf vs. mk 3" (and many such others) is a prime example of how to do it. The box here is a little distracting.
On the other hand, the visauls ARE very good. Unlike poorly done sprite flashes, the charas. here aren't "squint" tiny and move well. And the music is a nice selection for this flash. This just needs improvement on the flaws to gain more + points.
some good advice
Use dictionary, it helps. Really.
Let people skip text with some arrow button. Some just read faster and don't want to wait.
Graphics are nice for a sprite movie, I can't say too much about the story because I don't so much time. I can say it's good but you should keep working on your skills! Good luck with your next flashes.
well, there were some tiping error
lol eggman like amy???