This Was Odd.
But a good odd. The music was different, but fitted the whole rave thing with the strobe light effect. That was awesome.
You could have made the green dude do more stuff. The running around and arm waving was not just enough.
Author Comments
this is a work in progress just giving an update to show what im working on so be patient and comment on how it is so far. the song may be annoying but its by a certain group called Henry homesweet. !!!!DANGER FAST MOVING BACKGROUNDS MAY CAUSE TEMPORARY FREAKING OUT!!!!!
Unfortunately this file became corrupted while working on it (it didn't save and deleted itself all on its own)
----I will be working on a set of bios for each of my characters from the series it wont be action packed its a short little thing about evry1 in the SLT gang(i will once done with this start on an action packed video so be patient----
Creativ Criticism
Well um first of all you need to make the animation follow the beat of the song better even if it just the background changing. Second make the character do a little motion that would help a lot. Um maybe put a little shading and detail into the scenes. Lastly I would suggest to put a seizure warning in your description lol. but overall I would say you have a good idea you just need to change a little bit and it would be pretty damn good.
Ok I dont know what that was
But the choice of music is horrible. I listened to it for about 10 seconds and already the music was getting annoying.