This was awsome it could use more work , maybe a better tune?
This was actually notbad, kinda neat with the fram window and such, the little animation was actually notbad either seems as if the animation ran abit on the slow side though, look into that
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on speeding up the animation it seemed a tad slow, maybe even make the view screen somewhat larger as to see more
Like a movie player
Tis not a game.
You could have shown some change in the background and removed the fruit(?) instead of coloring over it. Also, you need more screenspace devoted to the actual movie.
I am still new with the flash program so in future animations i will get better at this, As for the screenspace i have plans to change that. Thank you for the review.
This isn't a game.
Music videos are a big thing on newgrounds, and they can spread the word about both an artist and a song, and while this did have an animation, it is much shorter than the song, it's small, not very well done, and didn't even capture the feel of the song. The credits you put up covered far too much of the screen, and is clickable for no good reason.
If you wish for an easy way to show off a good song, that is still well done, just put up some text talking about the song, and what it means to you. Just make sure to have the text change over time, having only a sentence or two up at any one time, rather than having a block of text to read. That will keep the viewer interested without him being distracted.
Thank you for the Review and you do make some good points, I will try in future submissions to change some stuff here and there, please note I am new to flash and still learning things on this site.
i feel like im in church when i listen to this.