um ok lol O_O
its good but it was bad a little and you should probably make it longer please
Author Comments
Hey, my second Bloo project. Short, 20 seconds only, sorry...
Need Major Improvement
INTRO
Well, it didn't really make me laugh or cry or anything, its just kind of there, something that exists, please improve the below:
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THE BAD
Well, the animation wasn't anything to get that excited about, you could've practiced drawing before you produced this. And it didn't serve that much of a purpose, it doesn't really fall into any genre that much. Nothing really happened and it was way too short to be considered a flash. it didn't have that much of a background or set either.
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THE GOOD
Well, I can't really find anything to go under this heading. I mean, it's slightly creative, I'll give you that.
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Overall, you could use some major improvement on your animation skills before you produce another flash, try practicing animation and test running it before you release another.
~Sectus
CupoOci responds:
yes. the next time i try to make a long flash. My bettest flash movie in the moment is Flash 2-The Game.
If you like, see that.
It was uhh... different...
It was ok... but not too great...
good
but blue has no out line and to get a better color of him get an online photo and cut a section out then use the sampling tool to get the right color.
