not bad
not bad i liked it a lot had a lot of suspense
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Hi Im new here in newgrounds , also im new in the flash animation, im practacly a noob xD
if you have any suggestions, dont hesite to write them because im really gonna need them,
This is a series of 5 episodes that im planing on making on naruto, The story begins when Hinata is atacked and kidnaped by Kisame, a member of akatsuki, later naruto goes to the rescue...................
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this is a sprite animation with a little touch of final fantasy music , and like 1/4 of animation xD, I hope you enjoy it
fuck you noobs dont need to create videos
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Meh
For a start The quality is not bad. Try not to be too put down as some people are harsh but Honest on how they feel here. I give you credit alone for actually trying to make a story. I think you have alot of devolping talent. The only problem I see is the story and characters. omega18 has a point on the characters and they are OC ( out of character some ). I just cant see Kisame interesting in Hinata. Hinata was made more of a mary sue then she should be. ... err, I'm going over whats already been said. You work isnt terrible. Please try not to take any of this bad. As for the story? Everyone goes thru a mary sue phase. Its okay but perhaps you might want to redo or throw out this story.
Yogui60 responds:
ok, Thanks for your review, actually this is my first after all , and since I have nobody to guide me well i did my best, any other advice you have? or where can i get tips to get better at the animation?
O.k
Lets be straight witheach other that was cheesy, but good cheesy. Tats my opinon others might not see it that way, there is room for impoovement, but nothi ing is ever perfect, keep trying though.
Yogui60 responds:
I will keep trying , actually i do this in free time and since i just started i have a hunger to keep learning
OMG Naruto & Hinata Love :D3
Seriously, that was plain awful. I actually almost thought this was a joke. It was that bad. Naruto sprite fims are submitted mostly everyday and it feels like each one is getting worse. The spriting is just terrible. The storyline is very expected and it feels like it was wrote by a HinataXNaruto fanboy/girl. It's messed up and makes no sense. Also, the intro was extremely stupid. What? You didn't feel like animating it so you just took a sense of the show on YouTube. That's just f**king lazy work.
Tips for improvment: Give up spriting and never do it again. You'll problaby disagree with me but do you want that 1.90 again and get only 3 reviews per day. I don't think so. You should animat something using your own characters or at least animat something with Naruto (I would not watch that) but still, at least your animating. Don't make it something that snowdragon or firorparty would do (like take a song or comedian rant and put Naruto characters in it). If you don't have the patience to do that, then give up. I'm trying to animat and it is hard but I'm not arguing. Overall, take the tips or you'll just be some Anime fanboy that makes stupid sprite films that will never be popular. Take them!!!!
Yogui60 responds:
ok , im glad that you wrote, i will take it in consideration, mmm maybe ill add some twist in the story, and dont worry i have a hunger to keep learning, after all im a noob, thanks for the review