OMG.............
That was almost as bad as your game! I would spend a while trying different things before you put something else on here!!! Try to fix the frame rate and maybe give it a purpose
Author Comments
Thanks for watching!
Go easy on me, this is my 1st flash movie, like, ever.
Email me at taylorbransfield@eastlink .ca
I am making a new Bobby The Circle flash game, and don't worry, it wont be that crappy...
Go to http://mindofmadness1975.
webs.com/apps/links/ for all my games...
Oh, and thanks to tomashcu for the icon! =)
Umm...
Animation not so great at all, but since this is your first its ok, I think you might have some good ideas brewing in your head, you just need to put down some real work.
MindOFMadness responds:
Yeah, this is NOT my best work, mabye check out my game.(still not the best)
Nice ending, but everything else was bad.
The Good: Funny ending.
The Bad: Nothing.
The Ugly: Everything else. Very little effort in terms of animation, artwork, etc.
MindOFMadness responds:
Oh whatever. It was my 1st flash so it's not gonna be that great.
for a first...
you should make the framerate smoother, have a better story, some better art, and maybe a bit longer. But overall, at least you figured out how to use flash. :P
good first try
the frame rate could be a little smoother, but I think you'll pass. you should try putting a little more effort into it; work at least 3 to 4 hours onto it. I'm only giving you a 5 because this is your first flash, but if it wasn't I'd say:
"GODDAMNIT YOU SUCK MONKEY FUCK!" But I'm not, because its your first submission. You'll hopefully get better.