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The day I became an Angel

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Okay hi guys >.<, it's my first time here~. And it's about my third or fourth time playing with Flash only... I hope this is good enough even for a first submission on NG :(.

I just got to know about Flash recently and really liked it. But my skills still sucked >.>. I don't know anything about those complicated Flash scripts thinggie >.>. But I hope that by submitting my works here and being around, you guys would help me improve my skills >.<. I would love to receive comments, no matter how harsh or heart-breaking they may be :(, if they help me improve. So please take some time to comment and give the clueless girl a helping hand, will you :D?

About this submission... It's a story about a demon and an angel. The demon had done some bad things and had to become a demon, a hated and ignored being. He became cold, emotionless, his heart stopped beating. All he needs is a little light, so he waited and waited, until one day... Watch to find out xD.

Sorry the voice quality is bad. My stupid headphone is so useless >.>. Both voices were done by me xD. Sorry if my voice gives you goosebumps, it did give me goosebumps you know >.>. And sorry for my weird accent; I'm Asian and English isn't my first language ^^;;.

Okay I think it's enough babbling... So, happy Lunar New Year to all my Asian pals! Xin nian kuai le! xDDD Hope you guys enjoy a first submission of a newbie in both flash and NG! <3

EDIT: Okay so the replay button doesn't work >"<. I promise I will fix it soon... when I know how to D:



i gotta admit, at first i did not read your description and just decided to watch the movie, and all due respect to those individuals, but i thought this movie was about being a lesbian XD
but seriously, it's not too bad, especially for not using flash long, you are a pretty decent artist.. the only huge problem was the voice quality.. like FoyvenMaven stated: "The voices were hard to understand, sometimes annoying and usually overpowered by the music."
other than that though, not bad!

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Linhtan responds:

Hey the demon was male you know xD. Thanks for the review :D :D :D I'll improve my voice quality next time ^___^

Not bad, sound sucked

The voices were hard to understand, sometimes annoying and usually overpowered by the music.

Other than that it was a great submission! Good work!

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For your first submission here at NG, this is incredibly AWESOME. The story is sad at the beginning but at the end it's happy. You are a different person. You dont like to make funny animation, but meaningfull. This story made almost CRY!

5 from me!

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Linhtan responds:

Waaah you really think so? xD You make me sooooo happy T^T. Thanks for the compliment <3333.


It looks damn good for your first submission.
Even though it isn't so cool on the graphics and the voices don't sound too well it just looks good and sends the message around ^_^.
If you just aren't good with english voices just use your maternal language and subtitle it :)

p.s. the music fits perfectly.

I give this 8 stars, 5/5 and hope that you will strive for perfection.

Hope to see more stuff from you ^_^

p.p.s: the angel's voice sounded good :P

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Linhtan responds:

Thanks for the nice comment and advice <3. I'll try my best on the next submissions <3.


It was ok animation, but the voice completely ruined it for me

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Linhtan responds:

Okay now I should REALLY remove the voice... Thakns for the comment anyway x3

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3.36 / 5.00

Jan 27, 2009
8:34 AM EST