It was entertaining enough to sit through, I'll give you that. A lot of people, i know, are way too critical on someone's first flash, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. You could be well on your way to developing skills that could make you famous on NG some day. Or, you could lose interest and burn out. Who knows. Either way, peoples' opinions on your submissions don't count if they're written in a language you can't read. Remember that...
thankyou for the comment.
*Lapiz cuidao si te pasa....5/5 o te pico*.
sorry, its not for you.
not too shabby!
For a first flash this isn't too bad, in fact the last scene at the very end was great gave me a laugh, if you refine your flash skills and keep up the humor you'll be putting out movies worthy of 10/10 and 5/5's so good job!
The drawings, like you said, were crappy, but there were two or three funny instances. The later surprise was a piece of crap, with snake being a horny pervert.
5 SOH pq eu tenho ctz que eh brazuca xD
Mas ae, a animação nem ta mto boa n. Compra um pad ou usa algum molde.
Alias, da uma melhorada no script tb, ta meio que uma historinha jogada em cada cena.
if you wont write anything that i can figure out, please dont write anything