meh
It was entertaining enough to sit through, I'll give you that. A lot of people, i know, are way too critical on someone's first flash, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. You could be well on your way to developing skills that could make you famous on NG some day. Or, you could lose interest and burn out. Who knows. Either way, peoples' opinions on your submissions don't count if they're written in a language you can't read. Remember that...