Ok that was bad.

Ok don't freak on me, but that was terrible. The landscape was shifted too far to the left so there was this nice little white stripe down the right side. The voices didn't sound all that great. If your using one of those cheap-ass PC mics, don't put your mouth so close to it when recording, it makes it sound crappy. Just a suggestion. Also you may want to recruit a friend to do the other voice so that the voices sound different.

umn...

Well the general concpet is good but its lacking in.....well in my head I was screaming "DO SOMETHING"!...because it was turning slightly boring. There wasn't much character development and the voices on both parts sounded pretty much the same. I think that ( and I know this'll sound cruel) you should re-do this but have it in a differnt style. Instead of sprites you could draw and animate it and maybe get a friend to do voice work. I know its within your capabilities, I saw your when vagina attack 2 flash and it seemed fairly well animated. Overall this flash was a nice idea...but not very well executed. Please don't slander me....=D

It Was.....

Ok You Get my picture dont be angry but that sucked U klnow how to animate walking so u should have made him go places and meet ppl NO offfence write me a message i wanna have a deal

No effort

I've never done a flash movie before, but if i did, i would atleast actually animate something, instead of taking nintendo sprites and voicing over a lame overdone trailer voice. Do something original.

hmmm

don't just talk and have a picture on the screen make something happen =/ like when he's talking about the dragon or something draw a picture of a dragon check out KFK kung fu karl for some inspiration that would be an excellent way to do this cartoon also pay attention to what's going on in the background as you're doing your audio there is a LOT of background noise... waiting for a remake of this done better

~ Dr. Pac