Ok that was bad.
Ok don't freak on me, but that was terrible. The landscape was shifted too far to the left so there was this nice little white stripe down the right side. The voices didn't sound all that great. If your using one of those cheap-ass PC mics, don't put your mouth so close to it when recording, it makes it sound crappy. Just a suggestion. Also you may want to recruit a friend to do the other voice so that the voices sound different.