I like the overall tone of the whole story, supported with the silence and the shading. It was also very well-drwn.
I just have one question: Who was the girl the sea-farer found?
didnt get it
way too slow
There was no raison/matter and why didint u make any raisons for it ? 3/5 but i liked the graphics.... nice job but next time make a raison/matter too :)
Allegory, sure, but what's the meta for?
I thought this was awesome, but I never saw the allegory (or the crocodile, for that matter.) Maybe the allegory don't come out if it's not wet. I'm glad nobody got eaten by the allegory. :)
You did a great job, and have added value to NG with your art. THANK YOU! The only critique I can offer is that the face shape movements might be more expressive if they were frame by frame. 10/10 and thanks again.
But kinda silent :((